McDonald's Persuasion

I disagree with this statement ‘McDonald’s is harmful’ because you're not forced to eat it and if you have learned about healthy eating before, you should know not to eat it often.

Main Point: Children and Adults know how to eat healthy.

Explain: In Schools children have been taught to eat healthy so that means they know not to eat fast foods and takeaways often, such as McDonald’s.

                                    

Example: A survey that was taken ‘how often do you eat healthy’ these are the answers:

• 26% said all the time.
• 35% said most of the time.
• 24% said sometimes.
• 10% said once in awhile.
• 5% said never

Main Point: You are not forced to eat McDonald’s.

Explain: Nobody would force you to eat McDonalds, so why would you always be eating it?

Example: Adult and Children can make their own choices so if they want to eat healthy they can. Nobody can force you to eat it.

Main Point: Litter / Rubbish

Explain: There are heaps of people who aren’t responsible for their litter and just throw it on the ground if you look around in public you will find lots of rubbish from McDonald’s.

Example: When you are going for a walk how many bits of litter do you see from McDonald’s? Lots and lots and lots.

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My Holiday Recount

Holiday Recount

It was squishy in the car. Really squishy. All the bags and pillows and blankets were around me and it was making me so hot. When we turned into my cousin’s driveway I sighed, I was so tired and hungry and I just wanted to get out and see them. As soon as the car stopped I jumped out ran up the stairs and my cousins were there waiting for us, waiting for me.  

They gave us big hugs and told us to come inside so we could have some afternoon tea. I was so excited when I saw my Granny walk in the door with a big suitcase “Hello” she said “ I love your top” she said giving me a hug “ Thanks” I said, “Are you wearing that to the party?”   “um, no” I said  “ Hurry Up then go and get changed then.”

We were at Aunty Cerise’s Party, all of us. It was for her birthday and her anniversary “ so she got married on her birthday?” Caitlin asked me “ yeah I guess”

I said. When it was dinner lots of speeches were said. There were lots of people who I didn’t know. I was cold and I wanted to go home I watched a dvd inside then I got bored so I spied on everyone who was in the kitchen I stood up on the tiny thin, brown ledge and watched them I listened to what they said but then Alice (my cousin)

Saw me she told me I was going home “what about you?”  “ I get to stay longer” “oh!” I said.

I couldn’t get to sleep at my cousin's house I was on their inflatable mattress and it was really uncomfortable I twisted and turned but I must of fell  asleep because when I woke up everyone was packing up not long after I got dressed dad said “ Right we’re off” We gave them big hugs. It was squishy in the car. Really squishy…