I disagree with this statement ‘McDonald’s is harmful’ because you're not forced to eat it and if you have learned about healthy eating before, you should know not to eat it often.
Main Point: Children and Adults know how to eat healthy.
Explain: In Schools children have been taught to eat healthy so that means they know not to eat fast foods and takeaways often, such as McDonald’s.
Example: A survey that was taken ‘how often do you eat healthy’ these are the answers:
- 26% said all the time.
- 35% said most of the time.
- 24% said sometimes.
- 10% said once in awhile.
- 5% said never
Main Point: You are not forced to eat McDonald’s.
Explain: Nobody would force you to eat McDonalds, so why would you always be eating it?
Example: Adult and Children can make their own choices so if they want to eat healthy they can. Nobody can force you to eat it.
Main Point: Litter / Rubbish
Explain: There are heaps of people who aren’t responsible for their litter and just throw it on the ground if you look around in public you will find lots of rubbish from McDonald’s.
Example: When you are going for a walk how many bits of litter do you see from McDonald’s? Lots and lots and lots.
wonderfull work immy :D keep it up
ReplyDeleteI love it but I disagree because they put a lot of salt in their food and if people think that they should eat it more than they should they could get heart attacks from all the sugar and salt but very persuasive. I say well done
ReplyDeleteI love it but I disagree because they put a lot of salt in their food and if people think that they should eat it more than they should they could get heart attacks from all the sugar and salt but very persuasive. I say well done
ReplyDeleteWell done Immy, I think that was really persuasive and yes, no one is forced to eat it. Adults and children know how to eat healthy, so they won't eat Mcdonalds all the time. :)
ReplyDeleteawesome great point in saying you are not forced to eat
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